English version
The gulls chanted our wails
the afternoon that you set sail for the horizon,
at the same time as a shaved orange sky
escorted him like a stowaway holding back the crying.
Once the sun starts to burn your skin
and with so much salt the journey becomes insipid,
may the wind awaken me to see you back on the dock
with the sea shifting mountain ranges.
Versió en català
Les gavines cantussaven els nostres planys
la tarda que vas salpar rumb a l’horitzó,
i el cel, ben afaitat després de molts d’afanys,
era el plor contingut d’un ignot polissó.
Així que la salabror no passi de coll
i el viatge s’hagi tornat fat per atzar,
que el vent em desvetlli per veure’t tornar al moll
amb les serralades inestables del mar.
¡Espléndido y fascinante poema, tus palabras han tocado mucho mí corazón, me encantan tus maravillosos escritos!!! 😍
Un fuerte abrazo lleno de cariño y feliz fin de semana! 😘🥰🤗♥️
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Muchísimas gracias, Ely. Me alegro mucho de que te haya gustado. Buon fine settimana e un abbraccio! ☀️💐😉
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Lovely! 🧡
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Thanks a lot. I hope you’re well. Take care! 😊☀️🙏🏼
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🌅 ⛵️ 💛🧡💜
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I hope you’re fine. Keep writing! 😉🙏🏼😁
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I am, hope that you are as well. I will indeed, just daily life has been a bit busy at the moment. 😁🙏🏼🦋🌻
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Lovely !💙
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Thank you very much. Stay safe, Dakshali! 😊💐
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You too Mam.
Stay safe and stay happy !😒
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Sorry ignore that emoji…
Stay safe and stay happy !🌸😊
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Bon dia Roser i molt bonic, m’agradat molt!
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Bon dia i moltes gràcies, Francesc. Que passis un bon diumenge! 😊🙏🏼☀️
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Igual tu Roser!
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So beautiful
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Thanks a lot, Jay! Take good care! 🙏😉🌞
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You too!!!
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It’s very touching..
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Thank you so much for your comment. Have a lovely Sunday! 🌞😀
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🙂 sure, you too!
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Lovely
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Thank you so much, Susanne. Have a nice Sunday! 😁😉☀️
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fabulous, you made my day with your writing, I am glad I came across your blog. So glad to follow you for future posts. Keep up the good work.
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What a beautiful poem!
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Thanks a lot, Luisa. I really appreciate it. Stay safe and keep posting! 🙏😊🌞
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My pleasure 👍 💙
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