My son, when I had everything
but I could not feel anything
I left the noisy city,
and took desolate trains,
and crossed unending pastures,
and saw different-shaped clouds,
and met civilized people,
and learned unknown prayers,
and worshipped tribal gods,
to become the lost key
to the door of my soul.

Absolutely magnificent poem, I love it!!! 👏😍❤️
I send you a very big hug full of affection!!! 🤗♥️🌹😘
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Thanks a lot, Ely, really. Have a wonderful afternoon ahead. I send you a very big hug too! 💐😘☀️
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A soulful poem and the imagery is so unique and appropriate!!
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Thank you very much from the bottom of my heart. Take good care! 🙏😊🌊
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Wooooow!!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Stay safe always! 🙏😊🌸
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What a wonderful journey-the path to wisdom! 🙏
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I really appreciate it. Thank you so much, Ingrid, and be safe! 🌸😊🙏
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Thank you: you too 😊
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Beautiful and enigmatic
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Glad you found it so. Take good care! 😊🙏🌞
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You are most welcome. Take good care too ❤😊
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Wow..lovely poem.
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Thank you very much for your words, Muralikrish! Have a wonderful day! 🌸🌊😊
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I read and read again. Beautifully written Rose. 😍
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Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart. Be happy and enjoy! 🙏🌸😊
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Truly soulful and revealing and wonderfully expressed!
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Much appreciated, really. Have a lovely afternoon ahead, Blanca! 😊🙏🌞
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Very nice!
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Thanks a lot, really. Keep writing! 😊🌊🌞
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🙂 🙂
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What a soulful and beautiful poem! ♥️
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Katy Clarie. Blessings! ✨😊🙏🏼
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you very much for your comment, Francine! Stay safe! 🌊🙏😊
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what an important message to pass on and live.
Lovely!!!
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Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart. Keep inspiring, Cindy! 🙏🏼💐☀️
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You are so welcome and I’m glad you are appreciative! I will and I trust you will do the same..❤️
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My mind and soul feels free and at ease reading this wonderful poem. I really love the supporting image too 🦋🌺
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That’s a wonderful comment, Hannah. I’m glad you felt this way and thanks a lot for your words. All the best! 🙏🏼🍃💐
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You’re so welcome, my friend, you deserve all the compliments on your writing 😊💫
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I love this one! It really paints a vivid image… Also sounds quite attractive in these days. 😉 Taking desolate trains to distant lands..
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I’m very humbled by your wonderful words. Thank you so much for your support, and take care! 🌊🌍😊
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Wowww ♥️♥️
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Thank you very much, really! Take good care! 🙏😊🌸
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Wow Lovely as usual your poems are so amazing. keep rocking 🙂
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Thanks a lot, really. Keep writing and enjoy the process! 🌸🌊🙏
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You’re Welcome 🙂🙂🤗
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Heyhey! Herr Carax und ich haben dich eben für den Awesome Blogger Award nominiert: https://caraxvannuys.blog/2020/09/06/awesome-blogger-award-2/ 😊😊😊
Ganz liebe Sonntagsgrüße! VVN
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Vielen Dank von ganzem Herz und gratulation! 😊💐☀️
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It seems this door is ever changing and, just perhaps, may not be a door at all.
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Yes! It’s just a matter of perspective. Thanks a lot for your reading. Stay safe! 💐☀️
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a lovely expression of discovery
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Thank you very much for your lovely words. Be safe, Ananda! ✨😊
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Beautiful…fabulous
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Thank you very much, Athira. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Stay safe! ✨😊
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Thanks a lot..Stay safe and Happy
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